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"You have the most entrancing eyes..."

Lost in the bespectacled reverie of her
glancing aura illuminating as we share
the last ride towards the Milky Way,
a chariot of bright glowing orange hues
and red sparkles.

"You have the smile of an angel..."

Wings, white feathers tethered to the
sinews of bone and constructed memories,
a strand that bore hope entwined with faith,
flying to somewhere into nowhere,
just as long as we had each other.

"You have the heart of a mother..."

A shooting star powered by the backlit canopy
of ideals and tribulations inside this perfect
shell call Asphodel, a goddess with unmatched
eloquence, class, dignified charity and grace;
heart of a mother, smile of an angel, in your eyes.
©2007-2009 ~LilithLairPoetry
:iconlilithlairpoetry:

Author's Comments

Wrote this as a myth and about another person I knew..:)

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:iconyour-canadian-angel:
aww this is so sweet, it makes me smile :D :D

:heart:

*FavS*

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:rose:There Is No Future, There Is No Past. Thank God This Moment's Not The Last. There's Only Us, There's Only This, Forget Regret, Or Your Life Is Yours To Miss. No Other Road, No Other Way, No Day But Today.:rose:
:iconslayerstephi:
Beautiful. I especially like that last line there.

--
"A bird may love a fish, segnore...but where would they live?"
"Then I shall have to make you wings."

>^..^<
:iconslayerstephi:
You're welcome. :D

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"A bird may love a fish, segnore...but where would they live?"
"Then I shall have to make you wings."

>^..^<
:iconferelwing:
Very sweet but this line seems awkward.

"a strand that bore hope entwined with faith,
flying to somewhere into nowhere"

Seems like it should read "flying somewhere into nowhere".

Other then that fantastic!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconlilithlairpoetry:
Whoops....I kinda remember deleting a part of that line and forgot to delete an extra word. Thanks for catching that part Lisa!
:iconferelwing:
*grin* not a problem (you're always catching my mistakes).

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconjedi-gemstone:
Pretty ^_^

--
Solitare is like life, just because you have all the ace's, all the right things, doesn't mean you'll necesarily win.
~Self-InjuryClub
*EverybodyPlush

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