Her arms feel like Saran Wrap around
my waist, pulling me closer to within
an eye-blink of her lips;
C O L L I D E
}{like}-{interlocking}-{chains}-{to}-{my}-{soul}{
Fill my heart with candy drop kisses
falling from a sepia-laden sky;
skipping (S)
(T)
(O)
(N)
(E)
(S)
while memories keep the ripples alive
watching as the world goes by
in a silent movie with you by my side.
©2008-2009 *LilithLairPoetry
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Full of emotions both happy and love, I tried to write it out and this is the end result. Reason why it got sappy and crappy at the end is because my roommate wouldn't leave me the fuck alone and my creativity died out. And I doubt I can get it back...damn...
Dedicated to *SicilianGoddess
Dedicated to *SicilianGoddess
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CommentsI really love this poem a lot! I really love how strong in meaning it is, how visual it is, and how the format is. DAMN good!! I am impressed
  In a short little poem you showed off so many good techniques and skills very very amazing  good job lee burrggeerrr!!-- Opinions are like assholes everyone has one...some stink more than others..  Thanks love for the review and critique, your words are generously appreciated.-- The world is my playground and God is the person I step on. |
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