Nimble fingers, take hold of a tree trunk--
gripping tight as it breathes slowly
with each murmur, opening it's mouth
like a yawning bear; forming the word
Daddy...
©2008-2009 *LilithLairPoetry
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Wrote this in #getLIT during a writing prompt and turned out to be a 2nd Place poem at WritersCafe.org.
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CommentsVery beautiful Lee
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-- Opinions are like assholes everyone has one...some stink more than others.. Really, very beautiful!
-- He will command His angels concerning you, to guard you in all your ways; they will lift you up in their hands, that you do not strike your foot against a stone Psalms 91:11-12 I'm going to Disney World!  yay
 "opening its mouth"if it's supposed to be possessive, then it's just i-t-s, but if it's supposed to be a contraction, then it's i-t-apostrophe-s, scalawag -- Tots and Teens: The Children's Literature Contest --Amazing literature and amazing prizes!!  Yes, I knowww..I keep on forgetting that..grown too accustomed to silly mistakes. Thanks for the fav bro!
-- The definition of Agony - a one-armed man hanging off a cliff with itchy balls. Thanks for reading Cindi!
 -- The definition of Agony - a one-armed man hanging off a cliff with itchy balls. For some reason I also got an image of you saying that, for perverse reasons.... -- The definition of Agony - a one-armed man hanging off a cliff with itchy balls. Thanks Amy!
-- The definition of Agony - a one-armed man hanging off a cliff with itchy balls. your welcome, lee
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