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Nimble fingers, take hold of a tree trunk--
gripping tight as it breathes slowly
with each murmur, opening it's mouth
like a yawning bear; forming the word
Daddy...
©2008-2009 *LilithLairPoetry
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Submitted: April 4, 2008
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Wrote this in #getLIT during a writing prompt and turned out to be a 2nd Place poem at WritersCafe.org.

Enjoy!
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Very beautiful Lee :)

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Opinions are like assholes everyone has one...some stink more than others..
Really, very beautiful!

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He will command His angels concerning you, to guard you in all your ways; they will lift you up in their hands, that you do not strike your foot against a stone Psalms 91:11-12
I'm going to Disney World! :woohoo:
yay :dance: "opening its mouth"

if it's supposed to be possessive, then it's just i-t-s, but if it's supposed to be a contraction, then it's i-t-apostrophe-s, scalawag

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Tots and Teens: The Children's Literature Contest --Amazing literature and amazing prizes!! :typerhappy:
Yes, I knowww..I keep on forgetting that..grown too accustomed to silly mistakes. Thanks for the fav bro!

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The definition of Agony - a one-armed man hanging off a cliff with itchy balls.
Thanks for reading Cindi! :hug:

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The definition of Agony - a one-armed man hanging off a cliff with itchy balls.
:hug: For some reason I also got an image of you saying that, for perverse reasons....;)

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The definition of Agony - a one-armed man hanging off a cliff with itchy balls.
Thanks Amy!

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The definition of Agony - a one-armed man hanging off a cliff with itchy balls.
your welcome, lee

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