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Promises; I made one year ago,
a moment I still keep in my head,
Only my memories and dreams will know,
When her lifeless hand fell onto the bed.

Parting words are just the beginning,
Soft spoken whispers at the eve of rebirth,
No farewells since she'll be there awaiting
My return to show love all it's worth.

It takes two souls to make the journey to Avalon,
But more heart to bring us together,
The hurt and enduring pain, are gone,
A pool of new endings make afterlife better.

I can't wait till run up that hill,
See the elated smile on her face,
Watch the stars set in perfect standstill,
And wind my finger of tears that I trace.

As my hands fall back into the same bed,
Woven with the memories and dreams we know,
We'll keep the ones we love and lost in our head,
And make the leap we promise years ago.
©2007-2009 ~LilithLairPoetry
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:iconladyauroraphoenix:
Another meaningful piece. Beautifully written.

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~Lady Aurora Phoenix~


"I reject your reality and substitute my own..."
:iconyour-canadian-angel:
beautiful once again Lee!!

this line however doesnt make sense in my head, although i'm probably just really dumb, it just doesnt flow right

"I can't wait till run up that hill,"

i think it should read, i can't wait to run up that hill or, i can't wait till i run up that hill..

i dunno thats my advanced critique for the day lol

although im sure my judgment isn't good at almost midnight

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:rose:There Is No Future, There Is No Past. Thank God This Moment's Not The Last. There's Only Us, There's Only This, Forget Regret, Or Your Life Is Yours To Miss. No Other Road, No Other Way, No Day But Today.:rose:
:iconlilithlairpoetry:
You're right...I goofed on that part...lol...
:iconyour-canadian-angel:
lol yay i'm not dumb

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:rose:There Is No Future, There Is No Past. Thank God This Moment's Not The Last. There's Only Us, There's Only This, Forget Regret, Or Your Life Is Yours To Miss. No Other Road, No Other Way, No Day But Today.:rose:
:iconferelwing:
Very well done Lee! *cheer* I've been missing your work!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconlilithlairpoetry:
Awwww...thank you and your welcome!
:iconferelwing:
:hug: You're very welcome!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***

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