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On the rooftop, watching a sunset's
afterglow fade from orange to purple--
while the stars are replaced by her eyes.

She watches over me with a protected
smile, her hand wipes the tears away--
her presence within a simple breeze.

Every where I walk, she's waiting around
a corner watching my freespirited stride--
her wings keep me dry from rain or sun.

When I lay my head down to rest
her warmth glazes over my body--
keeping my dreams warm with hers.
©2008-2009 *LilithLairPoetry
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Submitted: January 7, 2008
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Wrote this awhile back for my best friend Angie and how we're so similar in personality and that we love each other very much :D
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thats freakin ska
I didnt see anything wrong with it or that could make it better

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That's beautiful Lee, it's great to read something from you again.
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:hug: Aww thanks Allie for your kind words..it's good to be back again..posting stuff.

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Thanks Flame for your comment! Glad you liked it!

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it was extremely well written as always

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Oh sweet, thanks man!

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Goddessmidget (7:32:14 PM): your whole body is edible lookign
EuphoricNights69 (7:32:54 PM): *note to self: when angie becomes a zombie, run*
You're welcome, mate.

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