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We talked again this forth night
as the wind sang through the cracks
in the walls of this house, but I wasn't
cold as her voice warmed my heart,
and set my mind in trance of her
passionate wordplay choreographed
with the calligraphy of her dreams.

I felt like I was there by her bedside,
held her hand, feeling the blood pulse
through my fingers, her breath against the
nape of my neck; she keeps the air in my lungs,
floating along as the melody strums,
and as we lay down together
I let the waters flow over us.

For the first time, silence was just a
monologue with the heartbeats
in rhythmic motion as our eyes fell
three flights down to the
gentle clouds silhouetted
beneath the aurora of stars,
on the highway to anywhere.
©2007-2009 ~LilithLairPoetry
:iconlilithlairpoetry:

Author's Comments

Wrote this poem to my friend Linda after we had one of those good conversations at the end of the night...

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:iconbanditdorian:
Wow. Judging from the content, she seems like more than a friend. But I'm just a hopeless romantic. It has a sort of rhythm to it, sort of.. soft and gentle.

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:iconlilithlairpoetry:
It's one of those potential relationships that kinda start out as friends..:)
:iconmeagain3:
wonderful - almost exactly encompasses what it felt like falling for my current boyfriend... beautiful!!!! :glomp:

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who said that bad things come in three's in my experiance they come in ones - one big fuck off problem you never get sorted out!
:iconaingealdorcha:
I feel all warm and squishy.... I want a muse now... :O_o:

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Everybody wants to be a pirate,
Everybody wants to sail the sea,
Fighting, killing, plundering, and raiding,
Everybody wants to be me!
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We pillage, we plunder, we rifle and loot! Drink up, me 'earties! Yo ho!
:iconlilithlairpoetry:
:) Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts on it!
:iconjedi-gemstone:
Its nice when you have close friends to fall asleep on
Very pretty poem

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Solitare is like life, just because you have all the ace's, all the right things, doesn't mean you'll necesarily win.
~Self-InjuryClub
*EverybodyPlush
:iconferelwing:
Very well written one of those poems that brings to thoughts talks in the moonlight with a fire blazing.. Lovely Lee!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconferelwing:
Very well written one of those poems that brings to thoughts talks in the moonlight with a fire blazing.. Lovely Lee!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***

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